Here is my 3rd video. It was shorter this time, but more concise. It's definitely getting easier and I know what I want to say, without really having or memorized. I am trying to speak from the heart because I am incredibly proud of the program we have built. I can't wait to take it to the next level. I made sure to include the numbers again, as people commented on how effective they were. I mostly got positive feedback, so I really just tried to be concise and emphasize what we've done and what we plan to do.
Friday, November 9, 2018
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Here is my 3rd video. It was shorter this time, but more concise. It's definitely getting easier and I know what I want to say, without really having or memorized. I am trying to speak from the heart because I am incredibly proud of the program we have built. I can't wait to take it to the next level. I made sure to include the numbers again, as people commented on how effective they were. I mostly got positive feedback, so I really just tried to be concise and emphasize what we've done and what we plan to do.
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Your pitch seems memorized, and you spoke very casually and confidently. Using numbers in the pitch is definitely a good idea because these statistics make your program seem successful and popular. Highlighting the fact that many sharks are killed annually also highlights how important this educational program is. I cannot think of anything to improve. You speak at a reasonable pace and seem passionate about the topic.
ReplyDeleteStatistics are an important part in trying to hook the audience and I believe you definitely do a great job. You show real passion and love for this idea which translate through the elevator pitch. It is concise enough to keep the audience's attention as well as cover the points. It seems you have a great grasp on this pitch and your finishing line was very powerful. Well Done!
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